Parenting plays a huge role in person developing. Most of our habits we learned when we were child and most of them will stay with us until our death. One of that habits can be the knowledge of right money spending or more generally, financial responsibility.
First of all, after some age, children should take responsibility for all their movements and actions. This will help prepare them to the adult life and they will know that they are responsible for the task that they undertake. This skill can help them almost in every field of their life such as work, family, friendship and more over. Financial responsibility can easily be added to this list because it is indivisible part of our life and it has a huge impact on us.
Secondly, managing money will help them to understand how much important is financial operation these days. They should know how to save and spend money. How to make a right investments and how to spend their monthly salary to not become bankrupt. The best way to teach all these above is to give them a limited amount of money and show it on real life experience.
Finally, by managing their own money they can be partly independent from their parents. Starting from their first working day, they started to be independent from their parent and experience learned in childhood will help them to feel more comfortable with independence. They will knew that now, their jobs or businesses are the only sources which will make them to be more seriously about their financial welfare.
In conclusion, I would like to say that financial literacy is very important skill. This skill will make transformation from teenager to adult much more easier and they will be ready to the challenges that they will face as an adults.
- 74 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement In order to become financially responsible adults children should learn to manage their own money at young age 70
- TOEFL T P O 15 Integrated Writing Task 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 282, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'know'
Suggestion: know
...omfortable with independence. They will knew that now, their jobs or businesses are ...
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Line 9, column 149, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...nsformation from teenager to adult much more easier and they will be ready to the challenge...
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Line 9, column 225, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an adult' or simply 'adults'?
Suggestion: an adult; adults
...o the challenges that they will face as an adults.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 304.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79276315789 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61352151694 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523026315789 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7295655731 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0625 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178501329958 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661275236444 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439943402503 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973178667401 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390769133701 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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