Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Our current way of life will have a negative impact on future generations?
Many people believe that our present way of living cannot be influential on the future generation. They cite that the newer generation is innovative and will bring positive change to their lives by their own efforts. However, I strongly disagree with these people and feel that the way we are living our lives at present is definitely going to bring some negative changes in the future generation. I will state two specific reasons for my opinion which will be explored in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, the younger generation is going to face problems in the future because our life today is completely dependent upon science and technology which will eventually make them unable to do even basic tasks without the aid of technological innovations. In our daily lives, we are continually using smartphones, washing machines, dishwashers, vacuum cleaners, and other devices as such. Without these, our daily chores seem impossible to be accomplished. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. The other day, my brother and I had to complete our housework all by ourselves but due to some issues, we had a power outage so, we had to do cleaning and washing without the aid of any technological device. This incident had made me realize how dependent we are upon modern inventions. This implies that the younger generation will completely depend on machines in completing their tasks which will eventually make them less responsible.
Second, the lives in the future are going to be severely impacted because of extensive and haphazard urbanization and industrialization in the name of economic prosperity which is going to create an unhealthy environment for the next generations. The increasing pollution, global warming, and climate change are certainly the most important indicators that future generation is going to be affected. Human activities at present such as industrial development, nuclear bombing, and deforestation are prime examples of how the condition of the earth is deteriorating by human activities. For instance, according to research, the temperature of the earth is increasing every five years in a dramatic way, this can be a signal of how the health and well-being of humans are going to be affected in coming years due to the present way of living.
To sum up, our current way of how humans are living is clearly going to bring negative impacts on future generations. The reasons I feel this is because of heavy dependence on technological inventions and because of expanding industrialization and urbanization.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a dramatic way" with adverb for "dramatic"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...he earth is increasing every five years in a dramatic way, this can be a signal of how the health...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, so, well, for instance, i feel, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2149.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 412.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21601941748 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09755432917 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 693.9 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.8672538054 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.411764706 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2352941176 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41176470588 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227527675227 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712293707044 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651365087361 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14049462266 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537556235271 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 11.7677419355 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 58.1214874552 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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