Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Our current way of life will have a negative impact on future generations.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your essay.
There is no doubt in the fact that the lifestyle of one generation influences the other generation.However, the bone of contention here is whether the present day lifestyle has a detrimental effect on the future generation or not.In my view, despite all the progress that our generation has made, it fails to provide a physically, mentally and emotionally sound posterity.
To begin with, the current people are adapted to a sedentary lifestyle.For example- they keep on sitting on comfy sofas and couches with their eyes glued to their mobile or laptop screens.Likewise, children these days tend to follow what they observe.Most of the kids are engaged in playing video games and have playstations.In other words, least physical activity is something that the current generation is preaching to the upcoming one.It would not be a surprise that the future kids will suffer from serious ailments such as: poor eyesight, weak bones, stunted growth and many more.
Furthermore, the present generation is so much engrossed in their jobs that they have no time left for recreational purposes.Unastonishingly, they suffer from mental disorders like- anxiety, stress, migraine and in some severe cases, depression may occur as a result of chronic exposure to stress.These traits are likely to be transferred to young immature children.
Probing ahead, people of the present era are emotionally lacking.In other words they are poor at building and maintaining harmonious relationships with their colleagues or family members even.Being disdainful and passing on contemptuous remarks to others has become a kind of inbuilt trait in them.Unfortunately, kids try to imitate them and end up being same kind of person.For instance, my uncle is not at all a humble person.He rebukes his employees and disdains everyone.Not only this, he also keeps on passing abusive and disrespectful comments for his wife.He did not realize his mistake ever unless his ten year old kid slapped him one day.He realized how important it is to treat others well and to impart moral values in children in order to raise an emotionally sound and responsible human being.
To sum up, that is why i definitely believe that unless we mend our ways, the current generation is going to have a significantly deleterious impact on the forthcoming generations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, likewise, may, so, well, for example, for instance, kind of, no doubt, such as, as a result, in my view, in other words, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1974.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 371.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32075471698 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26941622743 2.67179642975 122% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628032345013 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 74.0 20.1344086022 368% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 214.733322985 48.9658058833 439% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 394.8 100.406767564 393% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 74.2 20.6045352989 360% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 35.4 5.45110844103 649% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123016729377 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772961916262 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050845403718 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0772961916262 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050845403718 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.7 11.7677419355 346% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -12.09 58.1214874552 -21% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 6.10430107527 280% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 33.3 10.1575268817 328% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.76 10.9000537634 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.78 8.01818996416 147% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.5 10.002688172 325% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 31.6 10.0537634409 314% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 33.0 10.247311828 322% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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