Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
“Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today's world." Use reasons and details to support your opinion.
Modern society has gained significant advances in technological side. Among these technologies internet base services are the ones that leading the way. Internet has made many changes to every aspect of society and life. Personally I believe these effects are positive. I feel this for three reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, Internet has made learning easier and enjoyable. There are free online courses offered by prestigious universities around the world. There are Youtube videos which explains complex concepts more lucidly. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. When I’m studying at high school, I was very weak at chemistry and I did not understand the teachings at classroom. Then I discovered a Youtube channel which teaches chemistry. After following that video course, I was able to understand chemistry and I passed chemistry with flying colours. Most importantly those videos are concise.
Secondly, E-commerce has made peoples life simple. Now they can buy things online and they do not waste time in queues. Services like amazon, eBay used to buy international products directly from the manufacturer. For instance at the university in Sri Lanka, I needed to buy books that are not avialble in Sri Lanka. Due to internet base shopping, I was able to order the book online and I received it within two days. If there was no internet, I might wait for more than month to order book and receive it. This personal experience of mine help me to realize the pros of internet and how it has help to make our lives easier.
Last but not least, Internet has improved the harmony among nations around the world. Through social media, now anyone can become a friend of anyone in the world. They share cultural values, knowledge which helps to appreciate others’ society and respect others views. For example, my friend university roommate met with an accident and we needed to do an operation to save him, but his financial situation was not so strong. Therefore we organized a fund raising program through internet. We received help from all around the world, both financial and psychological. That was greatly help my friend to success the operation.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that internet has contributed to enhance the quality of the life. We can see the popularity and spreading of internet and quality of life are parallel. As explained in the above it has helped to improve education, to make day to day activities like shopping easier and has helped to improve world peace.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 83, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'technologies'' or 'technology's'?
Suggestion: technologies'; technology's
...nces in technological side. Among these technologies internet base services are the ones tha...
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Line 4, column 431, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... financial situation was not so strong. Therefore we organized a fund raising program thr...
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Line 4, column 590, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'helped'.
Suggestion: helped
...ial and psychological. That was greatly help my friend to success the operation. I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2139.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 427.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0093676815 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7125848138 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552693208431 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 684.9 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7253193549 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.3 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2333333333 20.6045352989 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149941947401 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0336552248491 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0245777991818 0.0737576698707 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0766189097939 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0107636936784 0.0645574589148 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 86.8835125448 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.002688172 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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