Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today’s world.
Always, humans are seeking ways to have a better life. Without a doubt, the internet is one of the most important breakthroughs which have had an affirmative impact on our society. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, the internet has caused the rapid growth of science and technology in the last century. Obviously, it is the most important factor in conveying knowledge throughout the world at the highest possible speed, which means more people around the world than the past can study new achievements and contribute to it. The development of one of the most pervasive operating systems, Linux, is a compelling example of my reason. In the 90s, one of the computer science students of the University of Helsinki, Linus Torvalds, began to build an operating system during his course. After some advancements, he decided to share his initial operating system with professionals around the world to improve his work so, he posted the source code of his project through the email. Therefore without the services that the internet has created, Linux could never be the prominent operating system. Nowadays, the Linux operating system has a key role in the computer industry and it was not happening but with the widespread use of the internet.
Secondly, in recent years, the internet facilitates human communications by connecting far people. Social networks, emails, video streaming, and skype are services that are provided by the internet help people to communicate with each other in many ways such as sharing images, videos, and video or voice calling. Suppose a situation that a mother and her son are living too far from together. if they want to see each other, they must go through long-distance and it needs too much time and energy. But, in the presence of the internet, they can see each other just by a few clicks in the skype app. Another benefit of the internet in our society is sending a message in an affordable manner which means people can use email to sending their message instead of the past arduous methods. For instance, about 30 years ago, people used to write their message on a piece of paper with personal information then, put it in an envelop and go to the post station to post the letter. After several days, the letter delivered to the receiver, and this process repeated for responding to the letter. All of this process waste too much time and energy. But, in today’s world the widespread use of the internet simplify this process in a few minutes.
In conclusion, I strongly believe the use of services which are provided by the internet has amazing influences on people's lives. This is because science and technology can spread out around the world through the internet and because people communicate with each other in a simple way across the internet.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The adverb 'Always' is usually not used at the beginning of a sentence.
Always, humans are seeking ways to have a bett...
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Line 3, column 778, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... code of his project through the email. Therefore without the services that the internet ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...r son are living too far from together. if they want to see each other, they must ...
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Line 5, column 670, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an affordable manner" with adverb for "affordable"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...net in our society is sending a message in an affordable manner which means people can use email to sen...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...th personal information then, put it in an envelop and go to the post station to post the ...
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Line 7, column 270, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a simple way" with adverb for "simple"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ause people communicate with each other in a simple way across the internet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 79.0 52.1666666667 151% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2373.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 485.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89278350515 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69283662038 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64362865242 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509278350515 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 740.7 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2818857944 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.863636364 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0454545455 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13636363636 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184821725069 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535828565498 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521574484308 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111904378424 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0162183545708 0.0645574589148 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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