Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today’s world.
Nowadays human beings are completely reliant on the internet but Somewhere it is dettorioting our capability of thinking. Internet is a platform or source that explores a detailed query. I partially disagree and partially agree with this prompt Due to the following arguments
Firstly, the Addiction of the internet to youth affects the daily routine of life. Internet is so flexible that students have any query related to project or academics within a second they google the questions. The impact of this reflects on an individual's thinking and grasping, For example, I was very keen on the internet a few years ago and always used to take help of google portal, somewhere it doesn't have early signs but later it just makes your mind blank. Excessive use of anything is dangerous.
Secondly, The evolution of the internet has drastically increased over the period. A few years ago there were limited apps to explore with. In today's world, social media has its popularity and fan following such apps like Instagram, Facebook , Snapchat and Twitter has become the most powerful source of media and communication. For example, the moment there are riots, political view or abuse, etc is shared with minutes and the thing is viral enough to take it down or vice versa.
Furthermost, The positive impact of the internet is directly linked with the technology which we are using to the most extend. Innovations come with practice and practical implementation. For example, a high-level language like C is advanced to C++ and Engineers are evolving their code giving the best outcomes to organizations.
I would like to conclude by stating that the internet has pros and cons. Practical knowledge is more important than the theory part. To gain more exposure one should use the internet, learn and implement on the other hand Teenagers should use the internet for the usage of in-depth doubts and curiosity. Improvise, Adapt and Overcome.
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- Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games What are the negative impacts of children playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects 78
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Overall the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today s world 76
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 319.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07210031348 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76003141966 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605015673981 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0822389107 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1764705882 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7647058824 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52941176471 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246916052098 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633349018285 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586311148789 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12183313632 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225210489036 0.0645574589148 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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