Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parent are the best teachers. Use specific reason and examples to support your answer.
Many people in the world may disagree that the best teachers should not the parent and there are different reasons why people do so. As far as I’m concerned, this is answer depend on style of each person. In my view, I agree that the parents are the best teachers. I have a lot of reasons and will provide concrete evidence to support my viewpoint as follow.
First of all, the parent are more patient to all situations with relative me. When I was born, the parent is the first ones who take care everything to us. For example, when I was child, Peter, who is my teacher in the primary school taught tie the shoes by myself, but i did not understand how to tie them. I asked Peter about tie my shoes 2-3 times but she did not teach and help me. After I came back to my home, and I told my problem with my father. My father try to teach a lot of times and he did not complain me, so I can do it by myself. From the reason, I prefer that the parent are always patient and support me in every time.
Secondly, the parent teach me to try more frugal so that I can save up for buying anything with myself. My family is quite poor in the San Diego. When I go to park, I see that many children is playing football in the field; however, I cannot play with them because I do not have the stud. I try to beg my parent to buy it, but they do not buy. The parent suggest that I have to save money by myself by using technic money left from school. I spent of time about 1 month and I get a new stud to play football with friends.
In the conclusion, I prefer to choose the parent are the best teacher in my life because they are the best patient to my behavior and teach to save money up so as to succeed in my life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.02906976744 4.8611393121 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09418370608 2.67179642975 78% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485465116279 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 430.2 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0682223941 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203674779094 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719633623729 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643346330389 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140261547438 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0902157206058 0.0645574589148 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 11.7677419355 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 58.1214874552 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.09 10.9000537634 56% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.6 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 86.8835125448 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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