For hundreds of years people have never stopped debating children's education. It is a very crucial and critical thing for children's life since this decision-making has a profound impact on their future. Regarding this issue, some people believe that nowadays parents spend more time on their children's education than they did in the past while some others disagree and claim that the condition of children's education was controlled by parents in the past more than these days. From my point of view, I think the second idea carries more weight and I will enlarge on what I mean in this essay.
Above all, due to the bad economic condition, parents have to work too hard to make two ends meet. In other words, they usually go to work from dawn till dusk. So, they do not have much time to be involved in their children's education. Take my cousin, for example. He goes to work from 5 AM till 7 PM. When he returns home, he is sickened to death tired and can do nothing except going to bed. As a result, he has no time to think about his child's education.
The second reason why I feel that way is about the social media. Nowadays there a number of social media, which parents can use them. To be more exact, parents are less responsible for their children these days than they were in the past since they spend a considerable amount of time on the social media. Therefore, they do not have enough time to think about their children's education. My friend is a compelling example of that. I suppose that he spends at least three hours a day on his social media and when I ask him about the situation of his child's education, he knows nothing about it which is so detrimental for his son because parents should always be supportive of their children.
The other reason which deserves some words here is that nowadays parents pay others to be involved in their children's education instead of them. To clarify this point, there are a bunch of institute in our country in term of that end. For instance, Galamchi is a big institute that helps children to understand their lessons. As a result, parents are less involved in that process and let those institutes to guide their children.
To sum it up, given the facts that parents have to work really hard and they spend a considerable amount of time on the social media, in addition, some institutes can do that instead of parents. Hence, I think that Parents today are less involved in their children’s education than they were parents in the past.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun institute seems to be countable; consider using: 'a bunch of institutes'.
Suggestion: a bunch of institutes
... them. To clarify this point, there are a bunch of institute in our country in term of that end. For...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'bunches'?
Suggestion: bunches
...hem. To clarify this point, there are a bunch of institute in our country in term of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, really, regarding, second, so, therefore, while, at least, for example, for instance, i feel, i mean, i suppose, i think, in addition, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2051.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 447.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58836689038 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43461714226 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463087248322 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 627.3 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.8968910487 48.9658058833 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1739130435 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4347826087 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52173913043 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336546093484 0.236089414692 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992789565045 0.076458572812 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125273377052 0.0737576698707 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220036065357 0.150856017488 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0865030441758 0.0645574589148 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.66 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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