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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Parents today are more involved in their children s education than parents were in the past

In this contempory world, education plays a vital role and the peoples living standards has increased dramatically along with the technology. Although, some may or may not support the idea of parents involving in childrens education. I personally support the idea and this essay will explain why.

First, nowadays parents get involve in childrens education because they are highly literate. Unlike today, parents do not dare to engage in childrens education as they are not educated enough to provide support to their childrens educations system but they manage to provide basic needs like stationery items to their children. Coversely, this days parents provide guidence to their children related to doing homework or assignment which lead to improve childrens knowledge. For instance, in the past, my parents did not get sufficient support from their parents because they were uneducated and didn't knew the importance of education. But in my case my parents are involving more in my education system becuase they know that education is negligible and they ensures all their effort to give better education to us. Therefore, parents are more aware and tends to involve more than in the past.

second, parents are not only highly educated but also they assits their children to make better decision. It is mainly because they value education a lot than in the past year as they have better experience in the world where they can help their childrens to select better course or programme. In the past three decades, parents were quite primitive and they do not know what education means. For example, last three decade, our parents were not sensetive enough to sense the preciousness of education and were not able to make better decision about their kid future. As a result, virtually, all of the people remain uneducated and they were mainly emphasize on the day to day activities.

In conclusion, in this modern era parents are involving more in childrens education sytem because they are highly literate and also they provide assistance in makind better decisions in childrens life.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ery items to their children. Coversely, this days parents provide guidence to their...
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...r children. Coversely, this days parents provide guidence to their children relat...
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...arents because they were uneducated and didnt knew the importance of education. But i...
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Line 3, column 664, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
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...of education. But in my case my parents are involving more in my education system becuase the...
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...w that education is negligible and they ensures all their effort to give better educati...
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... conclusion, in this modern era parents are involving more in childrens education sytem becau...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 340.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16176470588 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59272838617 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488235294118 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 563.4 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0271580068 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.408986451491 0.236089414692 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167270784475 0.076458572812 219% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0848104365237 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245944637899 0.150856017488 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11294464575 0.0645574589148 175% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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