Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People behave differently when they wear different clothes. Do you agree that different clothes influence the way people behave? Use specific examples to support your answer.
In my opinion, different clothes surely affect my behavior. different situations and scenarios require different wearings, and I can obviously feel the change of my behaviors.
I am one of those sort of gregarious boys, and there are many chances for me to give a talk confronting with the public. Last month, our college held a meeting and asked me to give a speech as the student representative. only when attending such a formal meeting will I wear suits. my suits measure me well, which made me become even more confident, perhaps because the collar can make my shoulder and breast look more broad. And the speech was a success due to my confidence.
when summer comes, I change into T-shirts that are really a revelation to my body figure to which I pay much attention. It's really a good chance to show muscles in summer. And I unconsciously clench my fists or tense my arms to make the muscles look larger. It's really on top of the world when the surroundings look at me with admiration. when going swimming with only a pair of swimming pants, these constringe behaviors are precipitated, considering more muscles are exposed. The same effect comes when wearing jeans which are quite a reminder for me to jog more to make the legs slimin order to fit into the jean pants.
many friends of mine, especially girls, feel more influenced by what they are wearing. A girl says she behaves more quietly when dressing in skirt and more actively in pants, owing much to the flexibility distinction of different wearings. A guy says he gets more aggressive when he is in vest because many gangsters in movies are wearing a vest. Some hip-hop fans will behave more like a rapper with jackets and sunglasses.
my friends and myself all feel that what we wear has an effect on our behaviors. Though significantly or slightly, positively or negatively, the influence surely exists.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so, well, sort of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 326.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78834355828 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72504709438 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567484662577 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.548406284 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1578947368 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1578947368 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.63157894737 5.45110844103 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125796334048 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408430863057 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411890258368 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0772905614724 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550074088877 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.