This topic asks you to access the value of the access to a large quantity of information that the internet provides us with these days.
As electronic and information technologies advance, computers, intelligent devices and millions of applications and websites make it possible to access large amounts of information. What's behind the word 'large'? In my opinion, it has three aspects: a wide range of contents, a wide range of geographical distance and many meaningless duplicates or even fake messages. I will talk about them one by one.
A wide range of information is perhaps the most touchable aspect. Turn on the intelligent phone, hundreds of pieces of information flood the screen containing news, feeds of blogs and images and athletes data collect and transmitted from wearable devices. Daily news lets me know what's happening in the world and feeds of blogs and photos satisfies my interested topics like travel, sports and so on. The athletes data helps me understand the situation of my health. In a nutshell, a wide range of information makes people know better about the world, their interests and themselves.
Thanks to the Internet, people can get in touch with others regardless of distance constraints, bringing us in the process information with a wide range of distance. people from different places can discuss the same issue and share the same sentiment, people in danger or hunger will receive sympathy and donations from other places. A sense of global unity derives from the connectivity springing from the wide coverage of information.
However, fake and duplicate messages also come along with useful ones. Rumors and copies exhaust people. To mitigate this, many technology companies develop intelligent algorithms to help filter information and design more personal feeds. many states legislate laws to punish fakers. In fact, people also improve their ability to judge and corroborate the reliability of information conscientiously or unconsciously. Isn't the fight against fake news also a big progress brought by large information?
Perhaps it's hard or even meaningless to simply assess the value of large information itself; and yet when we regard the large information as a kind of resource, the exploit, utilize and handle the problems emerged from it makes the world a better place to live in, and that's the value of large information.
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| 2020-02-12 | toto | 83 | view |
| 2019-11-20 | Isioma Nwayor | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, in fact, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 15.1003584229 7% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1892.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 356.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31460674157 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92181824224 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573033707865 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.331398752 48.9658058833 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5789473684 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7368421053 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84210526316 5.45110844103 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174356789149 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448021413091 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494333561692 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0907788184568 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308970322209 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.