During our life, we may face with many different problems and it is really important for us to solve them properly. We may put lots of efforts and spend long hours for getting out of struggles and problems in order to live in peace. Simple problems be can handled by ourselves or even we can ask our families to help us, but about the statement in the question, I do not agree to solve major problems by myself and I think it is necessary to refer to the government. I feel this way because of some reasons which I will explore in the following essay:
First of all, most of us do not have adequate information about the law and legislation. The articles on the law are very complicated and hard for understanding for ordinary people and because of that many of people do not like to refer them personally. In my opinion in the complicated and important situation if we ask the government to help us we can obtain the best solution and result. Because if we ask our family or friend they may guide us incorrectly due to their limited professional knowledge. My personal experiment is a compelling evidence of this: last year when I was working in a computer company I faced some problem with my manager .i decided to leave the company and I talked with my friends about this issue . they suggested me to leave my job without informing my manager and I did the same, and after some days I received a letter from court and it was written that I have to pay some penalty and it was because I did not consult with a professional and knowledgeable person .
Furthermore, in complex and difficult situation if we ask government to help us we could prevent any further simple or complicated problems in future. Sometimes some problems may have bad consequences in future if we do not solve them properly. It is not possible to predict what will happen in near future and if want to be in safe side its better for us to solve our major problems fundamentally and what is better than ask an appropriate person or organization to help us.
To draw a conclusion, as I explained above the best way for solving our important solution is to ask government to help us because we do not sufficient knowledge about law and regulation and if we ask the knowledgeable people we could prevent any further problems in future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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During our life, we may face with many different problems and it is really important for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, may, really, so, i feel, i think, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1894.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 418.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53110047847 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77525100497 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.456937799043 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 614.7 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.1344086022 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.2142132664 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.692307692 100.406767564 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.1538461538 20.6045352989 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265546487145 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105717342498 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559169202521 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179557933007 0.150856017488 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459464773483 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 11.7677419355 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 58.1214874552 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.59 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.0537634409 147% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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