Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing.
Upon the question should people sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing, different people have different opinions based on their emotions. From my point of view, doing dislikable activities is a great idea because it has some benefits for us. In the following paragraphs, I will try to explain my position more clearly.
First of all, some activities are necessary for our physical and mental health. For example, when I was in high school, I did not like to participate in sport activities because I always wanted to study hard and go to a high-ranked university. After a while, I had to change my life style and I got used to exercising because I found out it improves my overall health and help me memorize information easily and in a more convenient way.
Another example is about food. Some foods like junk foods are tasty and delicious and I like to eat them. But junk foods have high amount of sugar or celery and they do not have essential minerals for growth. So, while junk foods are delicious and I like to eat them, I prefer to remove them from my diet.
Additionally, some decisions have long-term consequences on our lives. Currently, many people have to move from one place to another. They usually look for better jobs, higher salaries and so forth. For instance, when I graduated from high school, I decided to go abroad and study in European universities. Although I did not like to live far from my parents, I moved to Germany. In my opinion, living abroad had lots of advantages for me. I became familiar with other cultures and met prominent professors in Germany. In addition, I did not have any difficulties finding a suitable job after graduation from university.
Taking all the aforementioned arguments into account, it can be concluded that sometimes it is better to do activities that we do not enjoy doing because it has long-term benefits for us which I outlined above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 333.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75075075075 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75693339833 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558558558559 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9849427362 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2631578947 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5263157895 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26315789474 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208175363852 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569506649469 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111679692263 0.0737576698707 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144281614433 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14727501239 0.0645574589148 228% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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