Do you agree or disagree with the following statement. People should work what they like rather than what they should do?
Every day a tremendous of tasks are listed for people that they should do it. Even though they do not interested in, but they spend their time manipulating it. However. I definitely dissent that people do things they do not enjoy it. I feel that people should invest their time to do what they enjoy. I hold this opinion for several reasons which I will expound into in the following essay.
The first exquisite point that comes to my mind that people who enjoy what they do, they are productive. To be more specific, myriads people incline toward enjoyable work because they believe that they could make an eminent achievement in that work and become creative. Inventors, scientists, and researchers would never reach their target If they do tedious work or something considered to be boring. A vivid example to shed light on this subject. I will talk about my personal experience. Since I was a kid, I had passionate to be a scientist. Therefore, I continuously worked hard to achieve my dream. However, my dad compelled me to be an accountant. As he convinced that the scientist is not a lucrative job and it could not fulfill my financial needs. Thus, I obeyed him. Unfortunately, I could not pass in college and I felt so disappointed. Consequently, my dad felt empathy for my case. Eventually, he let me initiate my beloved career. Admittedly, I was luminous in my college and then in my work respectively. As a result, I was able to create a new element that could decrease the baby's fever in a split second. Additionally, I was labeled as a cutting edge in that field. My dad realizes that he was wrong when he obligated me to do something I do not like it.
Another point to be considered that a person who works a beloved job will attempt to promote. In this era, with the spread of technology, people try to keep pace with the swift life and contrive to grasp the job that they like. People acknowledge that when they are working what they desire, they could reach the zenith of their dreams. To illustrate more thoroughly. I will speak about my own experience in the work field. When I assigned in one of the biggest companies. I dreamed to be a manager in that company. Therefore, I took a condense course for management in the accounting field. Besides, I worked hard and stayed overnight at work to fulfill the work's needs. As a result, my boss feels ecstatic with my passion for the work and my immeasurable achievement. Instantly, he allocated me as a supervisor. Admittedly, If I did not love my career, I would not upward in my affair.
All in all, I firmly agree that the person should spend time enjoy what they do. This is because they could be productive and creative in their field and also because they could achieve their dreams and promote their position.
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- TPO 3- task 1 3
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However,
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ut my own experience in the work field. When I assigned in one of the biggest compan...
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...ager in that company. Therefore, I took a condense course for management in the accounting...
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Suggestion:
...ot upward in my affair. All in all, I firmly agree that the person should sp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, however, if, second, so, then, therefore, thus, i feel, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.0286738351 199% => OK
Pronoun: 99.0 43.0788530466 230% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2302.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 496.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64112903226 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76007990881 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477822580645 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 720.0 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 26.0 9.59856630824 271% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 36.0 20.6003584229 175% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.368537536 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.9444444444 100.406767564 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7777777778 20.6045352989 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.45110844103 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335070785361 0.236089414692 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814310761569 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111484762379 0.0737576698707 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244700526698 0.150856017488 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0858255966861 0.0645574589148 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 11.7677419355 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.04 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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