Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment-doing things they like to do rather than doing things they should do. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
By and large, it is established beyond doubt that people opt for a wide range of activities to spend time. There has been no shortage of debates among scholars on whether nowadays people devote more time to leisure activities than other important tasks. As this for writer's opinion, I do believe that individuals allocate the most part of their time to things they should do. In what follows, I will delve into the most crucial reasons to substantiate my viewpoint.
The first compelling reason corroborating my idea is that these days, people are leading a hectic lifestyle. Since the cost of day-to-day life is overwhelming for people, they should spend much more time working hard to afford the cost. This takes up time that individuals can use for activities they are interested in. Also, jobs' requirements involved higher education and professional skills required people to spend more time studying at universities or taking part in varied instructive courses to achieve those qualities. Therefore, they cannot spend their time on enjoyable things.
Furthermore, the expense of some entertainments is extremely prohibitive which are not affordable for a great number of people. My example demonstrates this reality. I had a part-time job when I was studying at university. I undertake the job to accumulate sufficient money to buy a piano and take a music class. The price of the instrument was so expensive that after three years of working I could not afford to buy it. This example clearly illustrates that the price of leisure activities can act as an obstacle that prevents people from doing things delight them.
By pursuing the above paragraph, one can infer that people allocate fewer proportions of their time to pleasant things. For the sake of brevity, a couple of points are worth reiterating: first, the expense of life and high qualifications demanded by jobs and second, the costly prices of favorable activities require people to dedicate much more time to duties they should do.
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...people from doing things delight them. By pursuing the above paragraph, one can...
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...uch more time to duties they should do.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, second, so, therefore, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 329.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11246200608 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86000632556 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586626139818 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7517363432 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9411764706 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3529411765 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.82352941176 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252835282437 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767296661748 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846374063059 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160236523479 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508180500314 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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