Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person should never make an important decision alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
we all face moments in our lives when we need to take decisions and act upon them. we are not supposed to regret making those decisions when we look back, and that is why we need to be careful and take our time to decide or we can ask people around for help in making that decision. Personally, I prefer to make an important decision alone for two important reasons.
To begin with, when we make our own decisions, we develop a sense of independence. Always asking someone to help you make a decision makes your character less weak because you do not show yourself that you are capable of making those decisions alone. Therefore, you cannot be independent in your life even after being an adult. For example, since my brother was a teenager, he did not ask us for our opinions in any decision he made, as a result, he is very independent now and can make his decisions alone. I remember when he wanted to travel to Australia to finish his studies, we were so worried about him being all alone. However, when he traveled he was able to live independently because he got accustomed to this kind of life where he does not need people around him for help.
Secondly, sometimes people can give us opinions that are not suitable for our situations. People will not see things from our own perspective, and they tend to be persistence to persuade us that this decision is the best. As a result, we might follow what they say because they keep giving us reasons that we eventually succumb to. For instance, I remember when I was still deciding what to choose as a major in college, my uncle kept persuading me that getting into science engineering is the optimum decision. He said that any other field of study would not have a future so I should study science engineering; I kept telling him that I hate computers so he said that I will get used to it as time goes. As a result, I applied for science engineering, but after one year of struggling and despising my life, I decided to change majors. I applied to study what I truly love, which is architecture. If I made my decision alone, I would not have had to waste this year in studying something I did not like.
In conclusion, we should make serious decisions alone to develop a sense of independence and make sure we are choosing what we really want.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 86.0 43.0788530466 200% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1887.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 422.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47156398104 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58968747364 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492890995261 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 621.0 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.821514438 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.833333333 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4444444444 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27777777778 5.45110844103 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163518409106 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581465086789 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660001587947 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103760029057 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382478587016 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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