some people say that the internet provides us with a lot of valuable information, others think that access to so many information creates problem, which view do you agree with.
Nobody can live now without internet at their homes or their phones, and that is basically because they depend on it for most of the things they do in their lives. I believe that the internet provides us with important information like learning a new language or reading books.
First of all, the internet supplies us with resources that aides in acquiring a new language. Nowadays we can learn any language we want without going through the struggle of finding a good place to learn and waste our precious time going back and forth from the course. You can easily access the web and find an enormous quantity of materials to help you at any time and anywhere like movies, dramas, YouTube videos and more; You could even be able to find native speakers to chat with and improve your language skill. For example, when I started learning English, I did not go to courses to learn the language, but instead, I started watching movies and dramas with English subtitles. I was trying to get my ears accustomed to hearing English, and besides that, I was also watching YouTube videos of local speakers giving vocabularies and grammar tips. After a few years, I was able to successfully learn it and watch movies easily with no subtitles.
Secondly, it is easier now for people to find books on the internet. We do not have to go from one bookstore to another searching for that book we want to read, and sometimes even after finding it, it turns out expensive, however, we can readily find it on the web and occasionally for free. For instance, I have started getting into reading a few years ago when I was living in Malaysia and some of my friends recommended a book called ‘The book thief’. I went to the bookstore searching for it and I found it very costly so I decided to search the internet maybe I can find it. Miraculously, I stumbled upon it as a PDF format and was so excited to start reading it. Therefore, all the books I have read for the past few years are books from the internet as I found the internet to be the optimum way of finding and reading books.
In conclusion, I believe the internet has valuable materials that we can use and benefit from like learning a new language or reading a book.
- People attend college or university for many different reasons. Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer 71
- If you want to recommend a way to reduce living expenses for your friend, which of the following will you choose? Why?1. Find a roommate to share a room2. Do not buy the latest mobile phone, Buy new technological devices less frequently3. Buy cheap foods 70
- If your friend wants to reduce living expenses, which would you suggest?1. Find a roommate that can share the living expenses.2. Buy the new technology products less frequently.3. Shop for less expensive food and cooking at home 70
- some people say that the internet provides us with a lot of valuable information, others think that access to so many information creates problem, which view do you agree with. 66
- Many filmmakers make movies based on books. When a movie is produced based on books, some people prefer to read books before watching films, other people choose to watch the movie first. Which one do you think is better? Why? 76
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1827.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 401.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55610972569 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54043365353 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488778054863 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 567.9 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.5955644981 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.8 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7333333333 20.6045352989 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 5.45110844103 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137085940823 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574226396674 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518226846826 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882358560994 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346760330984 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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