Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person should never make an important decision alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The way we live our life is based on the choices we make either good or bad. Needless to say, life offers a variety of situations in which a person has to take crucial decisions. No one can deny the fact that there are both positive and negative aspects of making an integral decision alone. In my point of view, I strongly believe that an individual should never take any important decision alone for a plethora of reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, a person may end up making bad decision as a result of lack of intellectual thought he/she have. From time to time, in life, there may be different circumstances which may have never happened before. If a person in totally unfamiliar with that particular situation, he/she may not be able to react in a proper way. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. For instance, five years ago, when I was about to marry a girl from another town, I was ambivalent if she was perfect for me or not. However, I took consultancy from my married friend and he suggested to gather each and every details about her. Surprisingly, it was found that she was having an affair and was ready for the marriage only in the influence of her parents. As a result, I did not agree to marry the girl. I could have been made the worst decision if I were to choose the girl all by alone.
Secondly, group discussion reveals more aspects of a situation leading to a practical decision. We can make our own decisions guided by the expert’s wisdom. To illustrate this, when my sister was about to choose her college based on her result, I suggested her to talk to us about her field of interest and the current professional conditions in our country. After our conversation, she choose to take her higher degree in medical science because she was much more interested in helping the wounded and the country needed more and more hand in medical sector. Thus, group discussions provided her a viable decision.
In sum, I strongly believe that making important decision by discussing with others is important because an individual may lack the practicality of the situation and the reasoning of others view often lead to explore the best possible decision.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, thus, as to, for instance, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2281.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 490.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65510204082 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70488508055 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64714332129 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495918367347 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 735.3 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2018428521 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0416666667 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4166666667 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162611529504 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494604519173 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521510141652 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113285173954 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429650961286 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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