Many people prefer reading fiction stories than watching them on movies. Instead of that, I really do not like to read very much, even though, watching pictures, landscapes and visual effects are more enjoyable for me, more than reading without those characteristics. However, this opinion could vary depending on a variety of circumstances.
First of all, it is well known that a movie based on a fiction novel, could never include every single detail from the paper story during the film. For example, Harry Potter, this novel had a great success, because the author could bring us a continuity, during the story, many events happened never could be described totally inside the film. In spite of the visual effects, readers who could see the same story in the film, are the best critics to support this.
Secondly, we can state that books which include a novel contain a wide number of pages, and producers cannot put everything on the film, what I mean is that producers and directors would have to spend many hours, in order to describe every detail from the novel. Moreover, we can mention that films are only the summary from the books. And as a result of that, people who like to read fiction novels and short stories prefer books instead of films.
Thirdly, when you refer to a fiction novel particularly a book, authors can describe in words all of they want, what I mean, it seems to be impossible to draw the entire thoughts from authors on a movie. Although, with special and visual effects directors are pretending to accomplish this feature.
Additionally, many people state that reading books is an opportunity to be relaxed, clarify your mind and also this hobby helps to avoid of stress, loneliness, frustrations, etc. Even though, reading books no matter which story is presented, supposedly you are more able to communicate and affront your daily life.
In conclusion, as I mentioned before, I prefer to watch the novels more than read them. Moreover, reading those stories take a lot of time, and watching them take just 2 or 3 hours. Therefore, if you do not have enough time to read a book, you better watch it on TV or in a movie theater. But this opinion could vary depending also of what story is, and how interesting events are happening over there.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 286, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put before the verb 'happened'.
Suggestion: never happened
...ntinuity, during the story, many events happened never could be described totally inside the f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, well, for example, i mean, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1898.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 394.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81725888325 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52123859986 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530456852792 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8919847543 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.647058824 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1764705882 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4705882353 5.45110844103 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242209528043 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864933491332 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730960853487 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129894803926 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683684301671 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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