Today we are living important changes in our lives. Unfortunately, actual society in the world is focusing on material things, producing a variety of issues which are impacting our natural instincts as human beings. As a result of this, it can be stated that people, nowadays, are less satisfied and less happy than people in the past. In the next lines, I will provide some reasons with examples, in order to support this statement.
Firstly, we can study a very common concept as a possible reason to support the paragraph mentioned before. Money, this could be one of the most important factors in which people are being distracted from their natural life and environment, in order to reach more power and domain. For example, if you have money, you can buy things, however, things are not the only thing you can get with money, what I mean is, with money, you can move to others with the purpose of obtaining services. The point here is that you can get good things with money, but also you can get bad things. Even though, money could be such good for people as terrible too.
Secondly, technology, actually, people are using technology to do almost everything. This is another concept could be mentioned, in order to understand how this has been created certain dependence in people for every activity.
For example, today everyone has a mobile phone, therefore, if your mobile device, for any reason, stop working or crashes, your day almost is over. What I mean is, if you do not have your cell phone, you cannot make calls, neither you cannot get money and even though, you cannot work, and as a result of that, you will be stressed and unhappy too.
Thirdly, we can mention also our dependency for living in a big town or big city. How many times do you walk in a natural place? Like mountains, hills, fields with vegetation, etc. In addition, this is another of the reasons how our natural instinct sometimes suffers a lack of this important necessities.
Concluding, as I mentioned before, people today, unfortunately, live less happy and satisfied than in the past, because of those all styles described in the last paragraphs. Moreover, I can suggest that it is very important to be aware our actual lifestyle, regardless these accommodations, trying to put in a balance what we have actually with our natural necessities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, for example, i mean, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1951.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 403.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.841191067 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61112700285 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511166253102 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4145608141 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.684210526 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2105263158 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.10526315789 5.45110844103 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21785679686 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715895644435 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568978649243 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118376025633 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530932718902 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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