Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Reading fiction (such as novels and short stories) is more enjoyable than watching movies. Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.
In modern era, people watching movie and reading the book for entertainment and pass time. If question about for enjoyable people split in to individual choice. I disagree to above statement is reading is more enjoyable than watching movies because story is only for reading not given visual and audio seen in watching movies.
Firstly, in modern technology various types of visual screen we can see in our home and theatre it is more pleasuring than reading book because we only imagine the scene, cannot watch visual event. For example, watching movies in different kinds of colorful visual screen like three dimensional (3D), projection screen, High definition quality and so more is more joyful than reading books and also it is not possible in reading book. In addition, in movies we can see different countries place, natural and historical place which is not see in real life we have opportunity to see this place in movies. Many adventure movies scene that fascinated to me.
Secondly, watch movies with friends and family member is more enjoyable than alone read the book. Watching movies are more interesting when we share comedy, horror, and adventure movies with friends and family members. Furthermore, we can do work and other activity with watching movies no need fully attention and able to divide eyes observation, while in reading concentration is essential for understanding the story. However, Read the books is good habit to improve the reading skill, find new worlds and increase the imagination power but it is not more enjoyable than watching movies.
Children are most attractive to watching movies because they does not like reading stories and novel and Animation films is more joyful for kids. In contrast, mostly elder people are enjoyed to reading novel and stories then watching movies.
In conclusion, reading fiction is not more enjoyable than watching movies, in movies we can see visual and audio scene with friends and family member and it is more pleasurable for me.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-12-03 | amandazzz | 81 | view |
| 2019-08-05 | Dahl | 70 | view |
| 2019-07-12 | dasepular | 76 | view |
| 2019-06-06 | farhadmoqimi | 76 | view |
| 2018-07-11 | Elena Cristina | 98 | view |
- TPO-19 - Integrated Writing Task Many consumers ignore commercial advertisements. In response, advertising companies have started using a new tactic, called “buzzing." The advertisers hire people,buzzers,who personally promote (buzz) products to people 75
- TPO-08 - Integrated Writing Task Toward the end of his life, the Chevalier de Seingalt (1725-1798) wrote a long memoir recounting his life and adventures. The Chevalier was a somewhat controversial figure, but since he met many famous people, including ki 81
- TPO-14 - Integrated Writing Task Every year, forest fires and severe stormscause a great deal of damage to forests in the northwestern United States. One way of dealing with the aftermath of these disasters is called salvage logging, which is the practice 70
- People should not have to pay for public transportations. 60
- TPO-48 - Independent Writing TaskDo you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 62, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'do'
Suggestion: do
...ractive to watching movies because they does not like reading stories and novel and ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 242, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...novel and stories then watching movies. In conclusion, reading fiction is not mo...
^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'while', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'in contrast']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.259668508287 0.229887763892 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.174033149171 0.158761421928 110% => OK
Adjectives: 0.10773480663 0.0866891130778 124% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0801104972376 0.046263068375 173% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0441988950276 0.0685040099705 65% => OK
Prepositions: 0.116022099448 0.118717715034 98% => OK
Participles: 0.0662983425414 0.0351676179071 189% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.54339196255 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0220994475138 0.0309702414327 71% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.024861878453 0.0887237588012 28% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0138121546961 0.0209618222197 66% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00828729281768 0.0139019557991 60% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2008.0 2387.08602151 84% => OK
No of words: 329.0 408.028673835 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.10334346505 5.86048508987 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.48200974243 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.398176291793 0.338922669872 117% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.282674772036 0.251872472559 112% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.173252279635 0.174417080927 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.109422492401 0.112833075102 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54339196255 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480243161094 0.524397521467 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 48.6427980003 59.2087087015 82% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6684587814 68% => OK
Sentence length: 23.5 20.5533526081 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4181139499 48.84282405 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.428571429 120.699889404 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.5533526081 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.14285714286 0.644075263715 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 51.7674772036 45.7405998639 113% => OK
Elegance: 1.48148148148 1.45489161554 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372157154602 0.300154397459 124% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.155930546853 0.103427244359 151% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0813793235129 0.0752933317313 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.641616193736 0.497263757937 129% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.177693043147 0.151897553556 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.189419832072 0.114077575197 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832550162269 0.0781384742642 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.36515804609 0.336927656856 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0357153589113 0.067059652881 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.28130723727 0.210909579961 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640779615747 0.0618886996521 104% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.91756272401 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 9.0 13.6433691756 66% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
---------------------
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.