Some people spend their entire lives in one place. Others move a number of times throughout their lives, looking for a better job, house, community, or even climate. Which do you prefer: staying in one place or moving in search of another place? Use reasons and specific examples to support your opinion.
In the modern era, every person wants something new in their life and connected with old friends. It is a most controversial question that spends whole life in one place or moving to the other place. Both options have the advantages and disadvantages. From my vantage point, I would like to spend my whole life in one place because of knowledge about our area, stronger relationship with friend and easier life.
To begin with, a person easily adjusted in the particular city if he lives in one place but it is hard when he is moving around the different place because of finding the better place for a family is not a piece of the cake. The person needs the money and time for find the new home. In presents situation not easy to find the job with satisfied salary but when the person live in the one place he has to know about the every job and also he get the help of the friends to find the job.
Furthermore, live in one place has important benefit is to connect with old friends and relative. Every person wants to make new friends but it is possible that new friends trustworthy and loyal because of if move in the other city a person does not know the other people of the city, he is new in the city there may be a chance to someone misuse in the friend relationship. It is better to live in one place so the person makes a stronger relationship with old friends, He can put their trust. For example, neighbors are those people that daily meet me and I can trust him because of I know about them and they are trustable and honest but if I live in the new city I cannot put trust to anyone.
Moreover, live in one place is better for child education because of when the person moves another city then the whole family has to move. It is a negative impact on the child's study, children are adapted to the current school environment, friends but a shift in other city causes miss school day and feel odd to the beginning of the school days. Besides, lives in one place easier and safe for our family. For instance, I live in anand since to my birth. I know about my town and there people also know about me. In case, if I have any problem such as a financial problem or any emergency, I have a chance to talk with other people they help me definitely but another city if I talk to somebody they may not help me.
In conclusion, live in one place in whole life easier and safe for our family, the person know about the town and people, he can put their trust on the friends, neighbors, and relatives. In addition, build the strong relationship with local people they help in any situations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 442, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...to know about the every job and also he get the help of the friends to find the job...
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Line 5, column 341, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'misuses'.
Suggestion: misuses
...e city there may be a chance to someone misuse in the friend relationship. It is bette...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 575, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_I[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'because I' instead.
Suggestion: because I
... that daily meet me and I can trust him because of I know about them and they are trustable ...
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Line 7, column 187, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... the friends, neighbors, and relatives. In addition, build the strong relationship...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, then, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2116.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 489.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32719836401 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70248278971 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34124090896 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.390593047035 0.524837075471 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 688.5 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.2365934597 48.9658058833 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.368421053 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7368421053 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.68421052632 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287733409417 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112860413357 0.076458572812 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0960928970995 0.0737576698707 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18636182218 0.150856017488 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289489837806 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.13 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.