Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To remain happy and optimistic when you fail is more important than achieving success.
Now days this sentence is commonly accept that, fail is a bridge for future success. Fail is not a good happen for anybody, but one things that is most important it is that what we could to learned from it and how we could pass it safety. Generally Speaking, I believe it is better for all concerned if remain happy and optimistic is more important when we fail.
First of all, it is important to consider health. These days’ people are under severe pressure in their life and a bad happen like fail in one important work can due to many diseases in this way many scholars believe that in such situation be happy an optimistic can help people. Some days ago I studied a paper related to this subject that shows people that were optimistic and happy in unsuccessful times were healthier.
In addition to the important of health, I think this is better for save times. Most of the people lost their time and output in fail situation, but when they remain themselves in happy and optimistic they can pass this period very fast. For instance, next year one of my friends could not success in his entry exam and after that he was so sad around five months and when he wanted to did entry exam again he did not have enough time for prepare for that.
Finally, remain happy and optimistic when we fail doesn’t necessarily means that happiness is not important when we achieve success in life. Reach to one success is a happy period in every body life time and be happy in this time help everyone to more effort for next plan.
By way of conclusion, based on the arguments explored above. I am of the opinion that in most cases it is actually more beneficial for most of the people to be happy and optimistic when they fail.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 130, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one thing', 'a thing', or simply 'things'?
Suggestion: one thing; a thing; things
...l is not a good happen for anybody, but one things that is most important it is that what ...
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Line 4, column 194, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...success is a happy period in every body life time and be happy in this time help everyone...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, first, if, so, for instance, i think, in addition, first of all, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 316.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45886075949 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33004891456 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487341772152 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.0 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5026908299 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.384615385 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3076923077 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241249178254 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103142221479 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0880922871754 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15753369089 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633141747427 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 86.8835125448 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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