Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Probably, it will not be a secret if I state that nowadays society is full of requirments, especially for youngsters. Opinions devide, and while many people jeoprdize todays society because of pressure they provide to young persons, others refutes this and by stating that the rules are not too strict. To be truly honest in my humble opinion, of course, and without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, I have to state that the whole world is overpressuring hte youngsters. In the following paragraphs I will elaborate on my points of view cogently.
The first exquitive point to be mentioned to is that, kids are expected to go to school and they are forced to compete inadequenly with each other kids, which, in my perspective is not the right way for the education. To be more specific, they should follow strict rules, drive themselves into some kind of general norm, which does not much to their personality. Drawing for my own personal experience, in my school every student was forced to wear the classic clothes, which limits and crush them as individuals. Hence, they should wear appropriate, but that does not mean that they should wear exactly the same clothes.
Another noteworthy point is that parents, who could not achieve their dreams in past exert so much pressure on their young children by obliging them to obey their rules. In order to make it clear, todays world give as numerous of opportunites, whcih our parents never had. Unfortunetlly, they seek their lost dreams in their offsprings abilities to reach them, which is unacceptable way of rising a kid for me. For instance, I had a friend, Erik, who was forced by his mother to become an aerospace engineer. He never enjoyed his profession, but, in order to make his mother proud, he continued to be one.
Equally essential to the previous reasons concerning why the whole comunity today is to strict to youngsters is time. In order to get accepted to Universities or collages, which have an insane competition in today’s reality, teenager should fully invest his time on preparing to exams. One has no time to invest in art or sport, which are so important for mental development. For example, I always wanted to play a piano, but I never had time to learn how to play. I always was stressed because of homework and exams, I even barely met with my friends.
In the light of the above mentioned reasons and examples, I truly believe that today's rules are to strict to follow for young Individuals.
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Suggestion: Equally,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, so, while, as for, for example, for instance, kind of, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2085.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 432.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82638888889 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69729767316 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548611111111 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 642.6 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3502669672 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.736842105 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7368421053 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57894736842 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133889877478 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04421612758 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621791965617 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.09596389012 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0738606067287 0.0645574589148 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.