Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There are always rules and limitations for people in all societies, and the youth acceptance has been always a controversial issue. I believe that so many of todays' rules are tough and not convenient to follow, especially for people in lower ages, for some cogent reasons.
First of all, the majority of these regulations have been taken from ancients' beliefs and are not effective and useful for our modern world. For instance, in my country teenagers are not ethically allowed to lie down and sleep in front of older people. To be fair, it is an inconvenient and bother for teenagers and there is no logical reason behind that. So obeying the regulations without any mindful cause is not a wise expectance.
Second of all, in young ages individuals are more stubborn and self-confident, as a result of which they do not compromise what they believe is true and is their right, just because of social laws. It should be noticed that being tough with youngsters sometimes causes dire consequences, such as making them stand against rules. So it is important to only introduce legislations which are necessary and unavoidable.
On the other hand, when rules are implemented, there is no difference between various groups of citizens, young or old, and everyone must obey the rules which legislated to save society from anarchy; and young people are not an exempt.
In conclusion, I agree that some regulations for todays' people, including younger ones, are strict since they are taken from the past and followed generation by generation without knowing the origins of them, as well as unfortunate results could cause by tough rules such as taking opposite position against the law. However, youth are expected to respect other rules and obey them because they are a member of society like other people, and constitution are equal for all members of community.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
... from anarchy; and young people are not an exempt. In conclusion, I agree that some regu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 311.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99035369775 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71982771612 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569131832797 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.5940270824 48.9658058833 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.333333333 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9166666667 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.45110844103 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180634076213 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562287402824 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470672583119 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0969089359297 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463114598064 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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