Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Throughout history, the rules of the government have been changed and evolved to make the appropriate society for living. Although some believe that these rules are in the society is strict for young people to obey it, the vast majority of people agree with legislation that they are completely suitable. From my perspective, the idea of the latter group is more convincing. In the subsequent paragraphs, I will elaborate on my points of view cogently.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that the socialists must consider all the ranges of the company. In another word, society does not belong only to the unique group, it is a collection of different people of various ages. As a matter of fact, they affect each other by their behaviors and works. Thus, it might harm other groups if there are no strict rules. To take an example, my father always complains about the style of young people, because he believes it has a negative effect on the beliefs of other people and also deviates other individuals from the true way or is the reason some crimes like betraying.
Another equally noteworthy point in corroborating this issue is that these rules are legislated by the experts who have a lot of experience and knowledge about this field, that spend a long time to study the effect of the different rules. As a result, it must be not only suitable for young people but also logical for society. According to the study at Tehran University, one of the prestigious universities in my country, the results revealed these rules may be difficult and seem strict at the first glance, though young people show satisfaction after the passage of the time. It proves if there are not any controls on them, without a shadow od a doubt, they will confront plenty of problems and troubles in their future lives.
To wrap it up, all the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that these rules are not only strict but also more advantageous. In fact, their merits outweigh drawbacks. Consequently, it anticipated the importance of them will depict in the near future.
- integrated writing TPO 40 75
- TPO 50 integrated writing 3
- TPO 52 integrated writing 7
- TPO 27 integrated writing 81
- Some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children, the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports. Others believe that it is best to use that time doing things together that are related to 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, may, so, thus, in fact, as a matter of fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1731.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8487394958 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68915441061 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551820728291 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.9477116394 48.9658058833 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.1875 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3125 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146983170286 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420986437397 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573014002172 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0912575633148 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428636528574 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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