TPO 49 integrated writing
The reading discusses that humpback whales manage to migrate long distances by the stars. The author listed three factors to support this idea. However, the lecturer finds all the reasons unconvincing and presents some evidence to refute all of them.
First, the reading passage points out that whales' brain is complicated and they develope some cognitive ability to help them to navigate by stars. On the other hand, the speaker casts doubt on this issue and states that there is no connection between their cognitive ability and brain. Because other animals migrate too and its sense is accompanied by them when they born.
Furthermore, the author debates that animals such as birds migrate in the straight line, but whales under the water could not do it as their way are not straight under the ocean. In contrast, the speaker asserts that objects send some external force that could be felt by whales, it turns out it is earth magnetic which is called biomagnetic. Hence, whales use it to migrate not stars. Consequently, this idea is rebutted.
Last but not least, the reading depicts spy-hopping which means the whales look at the star for some minutes in it is very unusual behavior. On the contrary, the speaker dismisses this idea, also, states that they do this action for looking for animals to hunt. The other evidence to prove this idea is during the day no stars can be seen in the sky, Therefore, their pure speculation is for vitality.
- integrated writing TPO 40 80
- TPO 18 65
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 80
- TPO50 integrated writing 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 374, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... is accompanied by them when they born. Furthermore, the author debates that ani...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, however, look, so, therefore, in contrast, such as, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1213.0 1373.03311258 88% => OK
No of words: 248.0 270.72406181 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89112903226 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39191087691 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 145.348785872 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556451612903 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 419.366225166 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4913394937 49.2860985944 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3076923077 110.228320801 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0769230769 21.698381199 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6153846154 7.06452816374 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.41396566909 0.272083759551 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135766699484 0.0996497079465 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0898925232457 0.0662205650399 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225006246554 0.162205337803 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395569276668 0.0443174109184 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.3589403974 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.2367328918 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 63.6247240618 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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