Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, living as a young member of a society can be devastating. Because of the age gap between young people and their parents, it is sometimes a really hard job for youngsters and parents to understand each other. In my opinion, the rules are not too strict but the young people are asked to fit in some family and social roles without knowing the exact reason for it. Hence, they may find them unfair and hard to follow. The second reason that I want to mention is that young people do not have as much experience as their parents thus, they may think their rules are too strict.
First and foremost, I think that the most important reason why young people find some rules very difficult to follow is that they do not understand the exact reason for it. Parents ask their children to sleep and wake up at a specific time, not to use social media too much, keep their distance from some people, etc. I think if parents talk to their children and express the reasons of their expectations, the children would know that some rules are for their own good. From another point of view, parents should try to be more understanding with their children and let them express would tell my dad to buy me a new laptop and my dad just would tell me that I could not have one, without any further explanation. As a child, I thought my needs are not important for my father. The other day my mom said to me that we are short in the budget these days, thus, we can not afford a new laptop. That was such a relief for me knowing the reason and I waited patiently for the right time. All in all, if parents and children try to talk to each other and be more understanding, this would solve lots of their problems.
Everyone knows that young people are really adventurous and they are eager to experience new things. Lacking enough wisdom may sometimes put them in a great danger. Parents try to protect their young children from doing something that may end to something irreversible. I, myself, as a young person did things that if I had listened to my parents in the first place, I would have gotten a better result in it. In other words, taking into account that it might be sometimes very hard, we need to follow our parents guides despite it’s against our wish.
in conclusion, when it comes to obeying the rules in families and societies, both parents and children should try to listen and understand each other and try to convince each other with good reasons. In this way, everyone can follow the rules without having any problem with them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, may, really, second, so, thus, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2083.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 464.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48922413793 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31159798586 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452586206897 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 617.4 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2191611292 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.15 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17863590382 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626219691128 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575130735627 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128902867323 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554848979524 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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