Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Sometimes it is better to be dishonest. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
I totally agree with this statement. Humans always need to trust each other. I think this is the base of human relations in every level. It would be very important to be honest. I will explain my reasons for this claim in the following sentences.
Firstly, I think to be honest is the most effective issue in a relationship. People need to believe each other and they need to believe that their friends and their family trust them to tell them the truth. Actually, I think the base of the relationship between the family members is truthfulness. For example, if the father in the family lies to his children or to his wife everything will be ruined.
Secondly, In the level of work relationships, it should be a trustful atmosphere in the place we work. If colleagues don't trust each other and lie to each other, they really can't work efficiently. Imagine some company that its worker don't really know what exactly happens in the company and for whom they really work and how much money really the company earns in a year, in such situation they feel that they aren't aware of the reality, therefor they do not know the company as theirs, and as you can imagine, because of this reason they prefer to work less because they think this is not their work and they don't possess the result of their work so they have no compassion for working. As we can see the trustfulness is also important in work relations.
Thirdly, the other important relation is the relation between the politician and the people. In this relationship, it is also very important to keep being honest with the people. The people should trust their government, they should be sure the government honestly cares about the people and loves them. If the power just belongs to some specific groups of a nation this unfairness may make the people of the country very angry. And it may follow with the revolution and the people will try to get back their power. But If they know the truth about everything that happens in the politic relations, and if they are aware of the details of the governing of the country, then they trust the politicians and they will perfectly support them. And therefore, the country will progress soon. So, we can see that this is also very important to always tell people the truth when we have power.
As I mentioned above, I believe that to be honest is very important and essential in all kinds of human relationships.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ere in the place we work. If colleagues dont trust each other and lie to each other,...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ther and lie to each other, they really cant work efficiently. Imagine some company ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...y. Imagine some company that its worker dont really know what exactly happens in the...
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Suggestion: aren't
..., in such situation they feel that they arent aware of the reality, therefor they do ...
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Suggestion: don't
...y think this is not their work and they dont possess the result of their work so the...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...so they have no compassion for working. As we can see the trustfulness is also imp...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... cares about the people and loves them. If the power just belongs to some specific...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, honestly, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1995.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 430.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63953488372 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50338872548 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.43488372093 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 602.1 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 92.2066489777 48.9658058833 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6818181818 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5454545455 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.31818181818 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0966022629998 0.236089414692 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373081141768 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047119802942 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0633113567557 0.150856017488 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449859224257 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.002688172 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.