Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends
Children behavior is an essential part of their whole life, as somehow it can form their personality. This behavior is affected by so many factors; family, friends, teachers and their growing environment are the most influential elements in a child’s life. As a result, parents always look for a practical solution in order to shape their child behavior better. In this order some people believe that a child is influenced by his/her teacher the most, in the other hand, some are staunch adhere of the notion that is about the impact of friends on children behavior. I completely believe that these are our friends that have a great amount of effect in our personality, and the ensuing paragraphs will explore rationale behind my opinion.
To commence with, all of us know that children often spend their time with their friends which are the same age as they are. They talk to each other, copy their activities, play with each other and so on. Therefore, these relations can be the most vital means in affecting themselves. For instance, two of my friends and I are close friends for more than 15 years, In fact, one can thinks that we are brothers as our personalities and behaviors are the same.
Another significant reason that deserves attention is the way of thinking; children usually think about the same think, as a result, they can influence each other by expressing the same ideas. This will encourage them to act based on their friends activities. The case of elementary school children can shed light on what says above. Sometimes you can see it clearly that they copy the words that their friends say without thinking about its meaning.
To sum up, friends have the main role of affecting their friends. They not only influence their friends’ way of thinking, but also they can navigate their friends’ behavior. Hence, a beneficial way for parents to control their child and shape his/her personality is to be aware of their child’s friends. In fact it will work far better than choosing and utilizing a good teacher.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, so, therefore, for instance, in fact, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1713.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 348.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9224137931 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64065763227 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540229885057 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4298755437 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.764705882 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4705882353 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17647058824 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289490672941 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101134142114 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063423636848 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191319427218 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523233464253 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.