Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students should take out student loans to avoid working while studying. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students should take out student loans to avoid working while studying. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Some students take loans to complete their education rather than get jobs to earn money. l I agree with this situation, because if they don't take these loans, their work will be impacted negatively

Firstly, I agree with student who take student loan rather than work because "working as well as studying may become a big issue. The issue is that student cannot get higher grade since they work in the time which they should be studying. It will be hard for them to arrange time for both studying and working, but this is necessary in order for them to become successful students. Scientists indicate that many students want to work to help their families, but this is impossible for them because they will lose all of the time, they need for studying.

Additionally, as you know, these days education fees cost more than in previous times time and some student cannot get education. therefore, some students cannot get an education. Thus, students might get an education and then after they graduate, they can work and they can pay back the money which they borrowed. For example, some poor families find it impossible to get an education for all their family members since they don't have a lot of money.

On the other hand, sometimes a student loan is a problem. The problem is after graduate you cannot pay back the money because of the fact that you can take that out if you want Therefore, the student who borrowed the money will be going to court to return the money which the giver loaned to him.
To sum up, as stated above, these some of the reasons that may influence our educational time and I accept to get loan if students need it.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, you know, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 294.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65986394558 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34059084333 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 212.727598566 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469387755102 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 417.6 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8884892544 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.166666667 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 5.45110844103 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21638042313 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985002122973 0.076458572812 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643421970603 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139245796479 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427336918878 0.0645574589148 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 86.8835125448 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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