Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well.
Throughout history, in all civilized societies, the issue of the prosperous people engendered copious controversies among people. Some people incline toward the opinion that people should take risks or try many things. Some others, however, may take an opposite viewpoint and believe that for become a successful person in the future, juveniles should perform work which they know it well. As far as I am concerned, trying new thing and taking risk is essential and crucial for people to become successful. In the following paragraphs, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
The first exquisite point should be mentioned is that the technology developed in the last years. Nowadays, the advancement in the technology happen at a very fast pace and cause many jobs to emerge. Therefore, the old and previous jobs are going to be replaced by new jobs. For example, many employers in the past work without a computer and their task was very difficult but after invention of the computer and personal laptop many companies buy this product and learning computer skill become necessary for people and after that person who learns how to work with the computer could progress in their life and earn a lot of money by learning this new and arduous ability.
The second significant reason supporting my idea is that risks give you great chance to enhance your knowledge and also helps you to use your information in practical ways. For instance, when I was studying in the university I have two friends in my dorm room. Both of them were the top student in the class and always obtain a high score on the exam. After a year one of their professors propose a job to both of them and one of them accept it and another one refuses it. In other words, one of them takes risks and another one believes that this risk is going to decrease his score and impact his study. Now the one who accepts the job is a very famous manager and other one are unemployed and looking for a job.
To wrap it up, based on the aforementioned arguments, because the technology developed and taking risks give you opportunities, success requires experiencing prime thing and accepting risks. Consequently, it is highly recommended that young students and freshmen of universities take risks because it is a requirement for success. In fact, there are myriad of other reasons, challenging the above statement, which could be mentioned but are not embraced due to the dearth of time.
- tpo 33 71
- In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct. 60
- TPO13 73
- some people say that the internet provides people with a lot of valuable information other thinks access to much information creates problems 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign country 69
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, look, may, second, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in fact, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2039.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 420.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85476190476 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68341995043 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547619047619 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 637.2 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.059239176 48.9658058833 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.277777778 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16648501058 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506785718076 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532967159388 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104347687641 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680878837961 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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