Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Successful people try new things and take risks rather than doing what they know how to do well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Success is one of the important aspects of human's life for which they compete all the life's time and try to achieve it to feel better about themselves. Some people belive that persons who are successful use new ideas and take risks rather than doing their own believes, whereas some other hold an opposite opinion. In my view, successful people have risky personality and test navel methods for two remarkable reasons.
The main reason is that prospective people vast their chances of success by utilizing new things. When people don't limite themselves to their own thaughts, they get familiar with others prospectives and see the problems from aspects which they don't consider. By knowing new concepts people vast their choices which decreases the rate of errors and increase the oppertunity to success. For example, when I started my work as a lawyer, I always restrict myself to my own believes that cause me to get a low rate of success in cours. I decided to increase my risk taking and utilized new things to improve my work. After a while, I learned alot by taking advantages of various new opinions and select the best ones which improve my efficiency. Now, I am a successful lawyer who attend to new ideas as one of the key factors of my prosperity. Although, using new things have a lot of risk and you may not achieve your desirable result, but it increases your experience which leads to success.
Second, one pillars of success is owning a competitive personality. Navel methods have high possibility to fail, however, prospective people have high competitive spirite which leads to improve their courage to examine new and risky methods without any hopeless or doubt. For instance, statistics demonstrated direct relationship between courage and rate of prosperity. Researchers investigated two groups of people, one who has a great deal of courage to take risk and other group is consist of conservative people. Surprisingly, results showed that individuals with high courage had more confidence which not only leads them to examine new things, but also to have a strong spirit to accept the risk of failure. On the other hand, consrvative people had a low rate of successs because their deprived themselves from adventurs in which they might gain valuable experiences to make them successful. As you can see, trying new things and take risk lead to be successful.
In conclusion, owning a risk taking personality and experiences new things have a strong impact in being successful. Not only does it expand oppertunity to be successful, but it also increases your competitive spirit. I think peopl should boost their courage to examine new things in order to be successful.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 111, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ss by utilizing new things. When people dont limite themselves to their own thaughts...
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Line 5, column 245, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ee the problems from aspects which they dont consider. By knowing new concepts peopl...
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Line 9, column 9, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one pillar', 'a pillar', or simply 'pillars'?
Suggestion: one pillar; a pillar; pillars
...ce which leads to success. Second, one pillars of success is owning a competitive pers...
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Line 9, column 32, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ss. Second, one pillars of success is owning a competitive personality. Navel method...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, second, so, whereas, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2258.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 449.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0289532294 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7630465824 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501113585746 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 701.1 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.326357043 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.523809524 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.380952381 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52380952381 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234336630561 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764444696994 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582111808454 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147988105612 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424869924034 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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