Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The statement raises the controversial issue of whether teachers were more respected in the past times than the present time.
If I were asked, I would definitely argue that todays teachers appriciated more.
To begin with, in the past teachers were frequently been treated as holders of lesser respectable jobs. Their worth were not understood by people as their salary were pretty much in the lower scales. And the salary range actually represents the position of a certain class in the society. But, currently, the teaching profession is given more importance than most of the other jobs as their payment is in the apex portion of salary scale. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter is profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. You see, my grandfather was a college teacher in his earlier age, when he had hardtime feeding his family. So he had to leave the profession and join the army. But, my brother, on the other hand, has left his previous well-paid job, to work as a school teacher which is paying much more. As a result, he is now having a better and respectable life. For this reason, I think nowadays, society is valuing teachers more.
Secondly, teachers from past decades were somewhat like grumpy and reserved. They thought of themselves as the separate section of people who should always have a distant relationship with their students. But, teachers from present times are actually the total reverse of that. They tend to get close to their students and that's how they gain more apprecaition from them. Drawing from my own experience, I had a tacher who was very friendly with all of hsi students. Pupils loved him more than any of the other teachers. Moreover, he got praise from the guardians of the students too. It would have been quite an impossible scenario for the past teachers. It is certainly clear to see why todays teachers are more valued and appreciated.
In light of the above-mentioned reasons, I feel that present day teachers enjoy much more value and praise than the past teachers.
As long as some measurements are performed and some areas are involved, it is my firm belief that my argument will hold true.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 324, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...tend to get close to their students and thats how they gain more apprecaition from th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, i feel, i think, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1813.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 373.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86058981233 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62618018679 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54691689008 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.9556802113 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.8260869565 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2173913043 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17391304348 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24151121864 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699664802086 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674443178931 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127208811393 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601761519212 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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