Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
he debates on what time teachers are recognized more - in the past or today has garnered a range of views. Nowadays, many are adamant that a myriad of elements should be taken into consideration to check the constructive and destructive facets of this issue. Some people posit that school teachers today are prized more than in the past. On the other hand, some others take the opposite side and disagree. From my vantage point, I agree with the former group. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following paragraphs.
The first exquisite point to be considered is the augment of education's value in society today. In a narrow condition, the teaching process has become an essential element in our world. Consequently, the teacher's value has climbed noticeably in the community. A vivid example that can shed light on this subject is one from my country. According to the statics, the appreciation of teachers has increased dramatically since the 1970s due to the rise in the value of education and schooling process in my country. All in all, if the value of the teaching process increase, the esteem of teachers will climb.
Secondly, another reason which deserves some words to say is that the number of teachers has climbed significantly. Teachers have become an important part of our society. Moreover, the teaching profession has become one of the most ubiquitous professions in the job market. Fortunately, this dramatic growth in the number of teachers has a positive impact on the value of this profession. For instance, the number of teachers in my country has climbed from hundreds at the end of the 1960s to about 90 thousand at the end of 2019. And as a result, the statics have revealed that the teachers now are more prized than in the past.
To wrap it up, in the light of above-mentioned reasons, I strongly believe that teachers today are more respected than in the past due to the increase in the teaching importance in the community also the growth of the teachers' numbers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, i feel, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 347.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8674351585 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76321456576 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50144092219 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5429548798 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8947368421 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2631578947 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05263157895 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205728872699 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624974982485 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454224738034 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12403702562 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0139285012035 0.0645574589148 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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