Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Throughout history, there are various occupations with different social levels. Some of them are considered as an valuable career, while others have less value in a society. Although there are some people who are of the opinion that teachers social level has decrised these days, I strongly believe they have better situation in the current era compare to the past. I have two main reasons for my perspective, which will be explored in the following essay.
To begin with, in order to know about a job's value in a society it is important to consider the salary of that particular career. These days, being a teacher is one of the highest paid jobs in many countries. To shed more light on it, I am going to mention my own chemistry teacher, Mr. Nami. He is one of the best metors in his field and I heard from other students that he has almost $100 hourly wage, which is an excellent salary among jobs in my country. On the other hand, in the past teachers are almost middle class citizens in each society and did not earn lots of money from teaching to students so they had to have second job to afford life's costs.
Secondly, when we compare teacher's current condition with the previous decades, it is obvious that they had better social situation. In the past, most of the girls did not like to be a school teacher's wife. However, now we see lots of girls who are dreaming about marring with a teacher, since most of them are considered as a sophisticated person in any community. My uncle is a retired teacher, once he told me about his juvenile memories he always complained about those days' circumestance. He mentioned that whenever he wanted to start a relasionship with a girl they run away when they realized his job. But it is not same for my brother, who is a freshman teacher and teach robotic in a girls high school. He even told his pupils that he is married because he noticed some girls in the class wanted to go out with him. This exactly shows that people are interesting in teaching job because it has great caste in a public, beside it's considerable financial benefits.
To make the long story short, according to the aforementioned arguments it is evident that these days being a tutor is a high-ranked job with a good salary and a good position among other occupations. So I think it is why we see more happy teachers nowadays in comparsion with past generation who always complain about their own siuation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 112, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'wage' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'wages'.
Suggestion: wages
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a girl' or simply 'girls'?
Suggestion: a girl; girls
...a freshman teacher and teach robotic in a girls high school. He even told his pupils th...
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Message: Did you mean 'interested'?
Suggestion: interested
...him. This exactly shows that people are interesting in teaching job because it has great ca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, i think, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1995.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 436.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57568807339 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56713883395 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520642201835 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 630.9 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.035787315 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9473684211 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63157894737 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15424346059 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518701375208 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335716177506 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.099263145388 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00508878227013 0.0645574589148 8% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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