Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays.
By and large, in this sophisticated world, educational issues in each level and domain play a crucial role in the life of people. While many people hold the opinion that teachers were more respected by society in the past, I beg to differ and believe that teachers are more honored and admired these days. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, it is worth considering that by the progress of the internet and technology, teachers can extend the number of people they teaching. Thus, the more they become well-known in social media, the more value acquire. For instance, one of my intimate friends is a French teacher who used to teach at 2 institutes. Every time I met her she complained about her job and its circumstances. After a long time not see her, I found her business account on some of the social media. Being honest, I became surprised when I look at the number of people who follow her so begin to search in her account and realize that now she is one the best tutor of the French language in the country. She invented a creative method for the joyful learning of French thus enormous people appreciated this innovative approach.
Secondly, let me take a look at this concept that as the human’s knowledge broadens, the attention of people toward the importance of science enhances. In today’s world, people accept that a good teacher role a critical key in their children’s future, so they undoubtedly honoring the place of teachers in the community. Moreover, I believe that the person whom be taught even will value this point more in the future when she/he uses them in real life. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. When I was a 16 years old girl studying in high school, I had a literature teacher who had such a kind and supportive personality. She spoke about the additional topic about society, lifestyle, etc besides lessons. Once upon a time I remembering her notes and benefit from them in my daily life.
In conclusion, I definitely believe that in today’s world teachers are more admired. This is because not only by enhancing technology, the number of people they taught increase, but also enlarge people’s awareness lead to admire the essential role of teachers.
- summaries the points made in the lecture 3
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement In today s world it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct 81
- summarize the points made in the lecture being sure to explain how they cast doubt on specific points made in the reading passage 76
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays 76
- summarize the points made in the lecture being sure to explain how they cast doubt on specific points made in the reading passage 71
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
..., etc besides lessons. Once upon a time I remembering her notes and benefit from ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, by and large, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1894.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 395.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79493670886 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6800622262 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562025316456 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2937229713 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6842105263 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7894736842 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63157894737 5.45110844103 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158176997342 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460900915566 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601549085077 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0995588188708 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436419371671 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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