There has been a constant drumbeat that modern society does not appreciate teachers compared to the past. From my perspective, I disagree with the statement and I will elaborate on my viewpoint in the following paragraphs.
Admittedly, some people might hold the point of view that teacher is more limited in the way they chose to educate students due to the development of technology. Students and society had a variety of methods to engage in knowledge, and the influence of teachers decreased dramatically. On the contrary, having abilities to determine what knowledge to absorb is the value of teachers, which is the reason teachers play a crucial role in education and have been appreciated.
Moreover, parents are more willing to experience unique education methods. Among countless factors that directly or indirectly influence strategy teachers approach, parents' attitude is the most significant one. Recent parents with more educated and mind-opened are willing to understand teachers' professionalism and let them do the job, compared to parents in the past who may concern or question measures that have been taken by the teacher. For instance, a friend of mine pursues education as her career. During the time she spend in the school, she discovered that parents nowadays are willing to interact with not only children but also engage with teachers and bridge connections. The relationships between teachers and parents are more like friends.
In addition, in the past, it was the family's task to prepare children's responsibilities in the future. Whereas today, with technological advances and the living condition becoming more competitive, the need for work has become obvious. In some families, both parents need to work to support the family. Therefore, they might not have enough time to spend on kids in order to make them ready for their future life, and teachers start to replace this duty. To illustrate, in early 2020, Oxford University published an investigation, the researcher demonstrate that an increasing number of parents rely on teachers for company children due to their busy work.
From what has been discussed above, we can safely draw a conclusion that teachers have more appreciation than ever before due to the understanding of the participation of society and parents.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 528, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'spends'.
Suggestion: spends
...tion as her career. During the time she spend in the school, she discovered that pare...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, as to, for instance, in addition, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1952.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 367.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31880108992 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96955224559 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569482288828 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0634199867 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.823529412 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5882352941 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05882352941 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232939397132 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696758762344 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417538929102 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131343074996 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399479092814 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 528, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'spends'.
Suggestion: spends
...tion as her career. During the time she spend in the school, she discovered that pare...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, as to, for instance, in addition, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1952.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 367.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31880108992 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96955224559 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569482288828 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0634199867 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.823529412 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5882352941 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05882352941 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232939397132 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696758762344 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417538929102 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131343074996 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399479092814 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.