Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Technology has made it easier for people to connect on a deeper level. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In this contemporary age, advancement in technology has brought a tremendous development to the communication system. People can easily spread or receive information as a result of comfort zone created by technology. I agree with the idea that technology has made it suitable for humans to communicate deeply. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, the use of internet has made communication easy. Internet is widely acceptable, quick and requires no energy to operate. Information reaches out rapidly these days with the use of internet whereby every human now have access to visit internet in order to transmit and acknowledge messages with ease. For instance, my sister was away from a seminar held in her office, she accessed the full information discussed at the event afterward from online thereby able to update her. Therefore, communication is easily widespread with the use of internet.
Secondly, affordability of technology gadgets promotes deeper connection. Equipments like mobile phones are now common and cheap to get. Availability of smartphones made it inexpensive through which uneducated people can afford and operate it, thereby, making it comfortable for people connecting to one another. For example, my grandmother always communicates with her son that resides in United state of America frequently on Whatsapp video call. Her son cannot withstand not seeing his mother on a particular day. Although, we can miss the in-person interaction, however, expansion of technology upgrades the relationship among people instead of complete loss.
Also, technology development improves the transportation system whereby building a stronger relationship than ever. Unlike in the past, when it is demanding to convey people by using horses or participate in trekking before reaching their destination. However, improvement arrives with progress in technology by the use of modern transportation that promotes deeper communication among people thereby making life more enjoyable and comfortable.
In conclusion, I strongly belief that technology has made life suitable to people by promoting widely use of internet, affordability of the technology devices and the easiest means of transportation available now.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1941.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65889212828 4.8611393121 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19642838446 2.67179642975 120% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606413994169 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 638.1 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.51630824373 125% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1907566912 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.157894737 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0526315789 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78947368421 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227708273061 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694139360629 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535214046095 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130598112885 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229296218135 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 58.1214874552 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.9 10.1575268817 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.25 10.9000537634 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.01818996416 122% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 86.8835125448 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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