Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

I agree with the proposed statement. Nowadays, life is changed than in the past. Living today is much complex while it was not in the past because there are many new things, and new problems that were not in the past. Technology is developing every day, and many machines work instead of humans. Personally saying, I think many new technologies have made children less creative than in the past.
Children had to work in the house to help their mother, or to help their father for his job in the past. Doing works by hand, Learning how to do or create something, finding a way to do something easily caused children to think very much. As a result, they could be creative, because they had a context to think and making works easy. In contrast, technology, developing machines, creating new devices, and many other technologies have made children less creative. They do not have to work or help their parents because machines do them. For example, My mom always says to me that she had to help her mom to wash dishes, clothes, or making food, but now there are washer machines. Even if my mom could not make dinner or lunch, we will go to a restaurant.
For another example, my brother is always playing video games, and he does not even exercise for his health. I think It is because machines do things and there is not any work for him to do. On the other hand, he does not have to do any work.
Today, even if we want to be creative, we have to go to university and study technologies. After that, we will able to make a change in technology and do something new.
To sum up, I think technology has made children less creative than in the past.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, for example, i think, in contrast, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 304.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43421052632 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43563258604 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490131578947 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 420.3 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3498123736 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8888888889 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229876911023 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894468227172 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865993088733 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156420547188 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109946952015 0.0645574589148 170% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 11.7677419355 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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