Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
Extreme busyness and long hours of work are the facts of the modern world. People always tend to find a solution to cope with overwhelming the workload. In this regard, some are inclined towards the idea that we should do the work slowly and make sure that everything is correct. On the other hand, others believe doing the work quickly and risk making mistakes is a better option. the controversial question that arises is which of these ways are the best strategy to deal with the high workload.
Personally, I am of the opinion that doing the tasks quickly even with making some mistakes far outweigh the first option mentioned before. In the following paragraph, I will delve into the reasons and examples to elaborate on my point of view.
The first reason that coming to my mind is that working quickly and risk making mistakes helps us complete our given tasks on schedule. If we decide to spend much time on every task with the intention to increase our accurateness, we might not be able to finish it on time. We could not finish time-consuming tasks on time by the first strategy. For instance, last year I was assigned to write a research paper in three months. As I wanted to make a good impression on my manager by doing the work accurately I wasted a lot of time, as a result, I could not finish it on time and receive negative feedback from my employees. However, If I had not spent much time on the task, I would have completed it on time.
Another noteworthy reason is that by doing the tasks in a short period of time, although at risk of making mistakes, we would have a chance to correct our flaws later. Modern technology provides employees to advantage many programs, software, and devices to revise their work and modify them. For example, whenever I write a report, I am not worried about the mistakes that I make, I just tried to do my task as swift as possible, then I have the opportunity to use a myriad of useful software like Grammarly to correct my errors. Therefore, I can finish the given tasks before the deadline.
From what has been discussed above, we can make a conclusion that doing the task quickly and risk making mistakes not only assist people to accomplish their task on time but also they can use some beneficial software, programs, and devices to correct their mistakes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1906.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59277108434 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53434644209 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503614457831 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9059229619 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.888888889 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0555555556 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05555555556 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288089332128 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093878365099 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900054148807 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180935839975 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0835420293813 0.0645574589148 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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