do you agree or disagree with the following statement? in today's world it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct. use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Without no doubt, I concur that nowadays people spend too much time on their personal entertainment instead of paying attention to activities they should carry out. reasons to demonstrate this agreement are much, however, I elaborate some important issues in the following.
The first evidence is that people usually spend their most of the time for watching tv. Indeed, with the advent of technology, television has became a fantastic tool for spending time with it. television has a lot of program for any range of people, from child to old. Moreover, the price of having a tv is cheaper to have for example a computer. this is why people prefer to spend their time wit tv programs.
On the other hand, doing what people should perform is usually hard. For instance, admitting to universities is not as easy as going to a park for example. You have to pass usually, depend on countries, an entrance examination and it is most of the time time-consuming and/or probably boring. Thus, although people know that going to a university or collage has more advantage for their future, they do not it.
Another reason that people choose performing enjoyment comes back from their characteristic. We know some people are lazy and do not like to do sophisticated activities. Such people absolutely do the easiest work. And due to their character, they prefer to carry out entertainment and so on.
To sum up my reasons and conclude, in my point of view people nowadays prefer to do personal enjoyment rather than important activities they should do, because of the new technology, laziness and their personal characteristic.
- TPO 45 73
- TPO 45: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. Use specific reasons and ex 76
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In order to become financially responsible adults, children should learn to manage their own money at a young age.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- TPO 47 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In order to become financially responsible adults, children should learn to manage their own money at a young age.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 166, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Reasons
...on to activities they should carry out. reasons to demonstrate this agreement are much,...
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Line 7, column 143, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...he advent of technology, television has became a fantastic tool for spending time with...
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Line 7, column 209, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun program seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of programs'.
Suggestion: a lot of programs
...r spending time with it. television has a lot of program for any range of people, from child to ...
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Line 7, column 348, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...cheaper to have for example a computer. this is why people prefer to spend their tim...
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Line 19, column 35, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to perform'.
Suggestion: to perform
... Another reason that people choose performing enjoyment comes back from their charact...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, moreover, so, thus, for example, for instance, no doubt, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 271.0 407.700716846 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08856088561 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8772351393 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564575645756 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.3313901808 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1875 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9375 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3125 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0840630088607 0.236089414692 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0316255616534 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332007214203 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.052309721806 0.150856017488 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230490282699 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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