Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In twenty years, there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
it is no doubt that since industrialization, the growth of motor vehicles hasn't stopped yet, however, for the next twenty years, I believe that there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
To begin with, I think the need for private cars will decrease as the development of public transport gets more improved. With more widespread of the public transport network, it will be more convenient to travel across the city, for instance, an underground railway usually takes less time to take you to the place you want to go than driving your own car in busy hours. To add on, the costs for taking public transport is also lower than driving in your own car, that you don't have to pay for the parking fees or gasoline.
Secondly, increasing awareness about environmental problems may also lower the number of cars in use. More and more people acknowledge how carbon emission from cars on the road affect our environment, and this has been an important international issue recently, it is not hard to tell human being are going to do something with that.
Thirdly, the tense on energy conservation, this has caused the cost of gasoline will increase in no time, eventually, it will be too costly to drive a private car.
Some people may say that more and more fancy cars or supercars are promoted by different car brands, people are getting more materialism than before to pursue these luxury items, however, I think this will only contribute only a small amount of number of car in use, as not many people have the money to pay for the expensive cars.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: It
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Suggestion: hasn't
...alization, the growth of motor vehicles hasnt stopped yet, however, for the next twen...
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Suggestion: don't
... than driving in your own car, that you dont have to pay for the parking fees or gas...
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Suggestion:
...cars on the road affect our environment, and this has been an important internati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for instance, i think, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 275.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77818181818 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57878438913 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589090909091 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.1344086022 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.5353413191 48.9658058833 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.25 100.406767564 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.375 20.6045352989 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.125 5.45110844103 259% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29083936087 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133524106162 0.076458572812 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712007909885 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165787795026 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0756780006913 0.0645574589148 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 11.7677419355 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.1575268817 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 10.002688172 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.0537634409 155% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.247311828 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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