Pollution is the hot topic for debate in these days.Though every one recognize the consequences of pollution and oppose pollution,Very few seriously take this into consideration in real life.we see many people in the society vehemently criticizing different kinds of pollution in news as industrial pollution but they themselves contribute to the pollution by using vehicles.
In my view Air pollution will not be decreased in coming days or after 20 years.As the needs of man kind increases ,We are exploiting the nature and environment in one way or the other.If we decrease the pollution in one way then we are increasing the pollution in other way.For example:we have reduced the air pollution by decreasing the use of wood for fires but we have increased the pollution by using more vehicles on roads.
Though The goverments and many organizantions across the world are pledging to reduce the air pollution but nothing of notable success was achieved till date.Because of global warming and man made disasters as cutting of forests for industrial use has led to increasing temperatures on earth and we are increasing the use of coolers and air conditions which inturn deteriorate the atmosphere still further by releasing harmful gases as CFCS in the atomosphere.We are also seeing the cases of melting glaciers very frequently than old times.The ways which we are adopting are inturn leading to more air pollution .
Untill we realize the importance of nature and environment and work towars sustainable life there will be no possibility of less air pollution in the coming days.
- The well being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority 58
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject 60
- Some people believe that success in creative fields such as painting fiction writing and filmmaking primarily requires hard work and perseverance Others believe that such success mainly requires innate talents that cannot be learned 50
- The following appeared in a memo from the marketing director of Top Dog Pet stores Five years ago Fish Emporium started advertising in the magazine Exotic Pets Monthly Their stores saw sales increased by 15 percent after their ads began appearing in 68
- Technology has made it easier for people to communicate with each other Some people prefer to talk over the phone while others prefer to communicate through text messages What type of communication do you prefer and why 65
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, then, for example, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 258.0 407.700716846 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17829457364 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02993615626 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581395348837 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 64.0 20.1344086022 318% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 160.755054353 48.9658058833 328% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 334.0 100.406767564 333% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 64.5 20.6045352989 313% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.75 5.45110844103 252% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0723586161236 0.236089414692 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486117445956 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0133164525402 0.0737576698707 18% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0486117445956 0.150856017488 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0133164525402 0.0645574589148 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.2 11.7677419355 299% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -1.94 58.1214874552 -3% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.4 10.1575268817 289% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.16 8.01818996416 139% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 10.002688172 285% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.6 10.0537634409 275% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.247311828 283% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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