Technology has grown in leaps and bounds .Technology has made impossible things seem possible which were once thought be as unrealistic as dreams. We are able to move from one place to other place very quickly which would have taken many days ,months or even years. People are able to communicate with others even if they are in other country, continent and space.
As we have grown technically advanced our mode of communication also has now plethora of means to communicate. We can communicate through phone, computer, fax and many other. Depending on the device the mode of communication varies and it also depends on the purpose one wants to communicate. For educational purposes many schools and colleges prefer only emails and they strictly restrict Phone calls as it is not feasible to monitor all the calls. Not only the purpose but also the situation and urgency is taken into account while choosing one mode of communication over other.
My preference to talk or message usually depends on the urgency ,content and situation .If there is an emergency issue which I need to convey then I prefer to talk because there is a chance that other person may miss the text message. Not only in my case usually people’s choice to use phone or text depends on variety of things. If someone is not able to explain the information through phone then they might prefer text over call. Sometimes it only depends on the choice and mood of the individual.
If one needs to share their problems or seek answers from other then they might prefer to talk as they are expecting emotional support and want the reaction of other person to react instantly. There are cases when talking over phone is not possible as if I were in a meeting and in the midst of it I got reminded of something which I need to say immediately then Text messages are the only reliable way of method to communicate the matter .henceforth,
Choosing phone to talk or text depends on many things in which few are in our control and few are not in our hands to decide on.
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...quickly which would have taken many days ,months or even years. People are able t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 360.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56312285414 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483333333333 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 547.2 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.3222677038 48.9658058833 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7142857143 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.45110844103 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.5376344086 397% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351929871648 0.236089414692 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1219894146 0.076458572812 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737792834358 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176851384983 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652659155055 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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