Some people believe that success in creative fields, such as painting, fiction writing, and filmmaking, primarily requires hard work and perseverance. Others believe that such success mainly requires innate talents that cannot be learned.
This issue raises the contentious issue of whether success in creative fields as painting and writing mainly requires hard work and perseverance or talent .
Success is measured by different people in different ways as some can define success to a film if has achieved Oscar award or some can define a film to be success if it has inspired many people for greater good to the society .So success is a metric which is not constant and is always a debatable one.
Indisputably, For a person to be successful requires talent and capability to achieve anything. As without talent one cannot get the desired result in creative fields as writing, film making and painting. it comes to fiction the author should be able to think creatively and visualize the consequences in the imaginary world which never took place or will happen in real life. For example: If you consider the famous book harry potter, Jk rowling created an imaginary world which drew many people crazy .In this case it was her talent to create such a master piece.
Nevertheless, Talent is the not the primary quality to achieve success. To be successful in any filed even in creative fields as writing ,painting and fiction one needs hard work and perseverance to reach success.
Thus ,I generally disagree with the opinion that talent is the primary thing to achieve success and would argue that hard work and perseverance is more important to reach success.
First of all, For any person to be successful he requires hardwork ,effort and resilence .For example if you take the example of Painting Monalisa ,one of the finest master piece. Leonardo showed so much effort and perseverance to finish this..In this case ,It is his hardwork which bore fruit so we can say that hard work and perseverance is very important.
Furthermore, when we consider many movies like Avatar ,This kind of extra ordinary movies took so long time to finish but they are considered as the examples of the great movies. To achieve anything extra ordinary and special it may take many days, months ,years and may be even a decade. So to achieve anything to be remarkable it takes a lot of hard work and patience as they cannot finished early.
Admittedly, there might be few cases where innate talent plays a major role like Shakuntala devi who is pioneer in the world as human computer and she was even faster than computer. She was born with innate talent. This a extra ordinary case that one can argue that it is her talent which paved her way to success.There are rare examples one might argue to prove their point.
In conclusion, although talent is essential but hardwork and perseverance is more important to achieve success or something remarkable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2245.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 464.0 442.535393258 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83836206897 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58504642605 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48275862069 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 721.8 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9312179761 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.722222222 118.986275619 105% => OK
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Discourse Markers: 5.94444444444 5.21951772744 114% => OK
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Language errors: 29.0 7.80617977528 372% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.121063973512 0.0831039109588 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0941663442595 0.0758088955206 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177953746714 0.150359130593 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0990552326819 0.0667264976115 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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