Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people just attend classes aned libraries. They just study to gain hight score and get certificate. Others, go to universities and colleges to learn new things and improve their abilities. There are some features to attend sport and socil activity classes because of improving talented and enhace the world,so in my opinion, soprts and social activities are really crucial in u7niversities and colleges that I will mention in following sentences.
Sport classes have some benefits for students . Firstly, students who attend in these classes can become in shape and have a healthy life because they learn crucial things about their body, so with this knowledge, they try to follow healthy diet and avoid eat harmful food. For instance, when I was a university student, I did not eat rice at nights because my coach gave advice to me about my diet to was shape.
In addition, students can have competition with other students frome other unniversities and colleges to improve their ability and gain rank. Actually, having rival encourage students to practice for becoming win. I am a swimmer, and I have practiced to participate in a competition. I should attention to my diet, and also I must practice at leats four hour a day, it is extremely hard, but it worthwhile.
Social activity classes have a positive impact on society because of some reasons. If students attend social activity classes, they will learn how to interact with other people in the world. Besides, they will learn some new things to creat
For instance, when I was a college student, I attended a social class. We were a group to collected garbej frome the nature. Every weekend, we went to the nature and remove trash. Also, we set some signs about thowing trash and damage caused by them. Our activity caused, some people attention to them and tried not to throw their garbej. I think we were succesful in our activity because now I am seeing positive effect since then.
As a result, these classes are really crucial for students who attend in colleges and universities because of reasons which I mentioned in two previece paraghraphs. Actually, these classes can improve students ability and encourage them to follow suitable diet, and participate in different competition. Moreover, these classes can encourage students to attention to the nature and world's future. Because of these reasons, I do agree whit this statement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 272, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rt and socil activity classes because of improving talented and enhace the world,...
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Line 1, column 313, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , so
... improving talented and enhace the world,so in my opinion, soprts and social activi...
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Line 2, column 46, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... classes have some benefits for students . Firstly, students who attend in these c...
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Line 3, column 241, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'practiced participating'.
Suggestion: practiced participating
...ecoming win. I am a swimmer, and I have practiced to participate in a competition. I should attention to...
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Line 3, column 354, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'hour' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'hours'.
Suggestion: hours
... and also I must practice at leats four hour a day, it is extremely hard, but it wor...
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Line 4, column 240, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...they will learn some new things to creat For instance, when I was a college stude...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, really, so, then, while, for instance, i think, in addition, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2014.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 400.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.035 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.649489508 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.4925 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 641.7 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.0393331511 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5652173913 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3913043478 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.39130434783 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15404017284 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495489681298 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037603584195 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0885896843223 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381978610953 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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