Do you agree or disagree with the following statement At universities and colleges sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
In my perspective, Group activities such as sports by far are more important than classes and libraries and should receive equal financial funds. I will pinpoint my reasons in the below paragraphs.
The first aspect to point is that it helps students to be more relaxed. Students attend class and study for their assignments all the time. This kind of task can be stressful for students and can tire their minds. However, engaging in sports activities is helpful for them since it causes students to be more relaxed. Therefore, the mind of students can gain peace by doing exercise.
A furthermore subtle point is that people can make friends. There is a competition between students to make the best impression and performance in the class. Because of that, they can make friend in their own classroom. Nevertheless, students in sports activities will interact with other members of the team and since their goal is to win, they should help each other which make a friendship between them. Moreover, the students learn how to socialize with other people which is one of the most essential characteristics of a person who wants to become successful in his future life.
The other reason worth mentioning is that students who engage in sports activities are healthier. In this era, the health of people are the most significant crisis of society. A student who does sports will enhance their overall health. Also, sports activities will robust their body and help them to be more active. For instance, a person who does sports at a regular time does not get tired easily since he has a lot of energy. Therefore, students can assign more time to their studies since they have more energy to focus and finish their studies.
To make a long story short, based on the aforementioned arguments, the university should spend more financial support on sports activities in comparison to classes and libraries, because not only cause students to relax but also, learn them how to make friends, and enhance their health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, for instance, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 339.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9587020649 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63496307936 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504424778761 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.3762428275 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4736842105 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8421052632 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94736842105 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163556655163 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530485367329 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712389966693 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117366684609 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700027236208 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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