do you agree or disagree with the following statement? At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support. use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In preceding decades, universities and colleges invest a portion of their finances on developing sports and social activity. Although many people tend to hold the idea that students should concentrate on education and university ought to cost the money on training and equipping the laboratories, from my perspective social activities and sports training are the significant parts of education. In the following paragraphs, the most important reasons will be explored.
Firstly, education is not restricted to science courses. Socializing is one of the most important activities which student should learn in educational spaces. It also helps them to improve the social behavior patterns that make them qualify for their following responsibilities. Take a personal experience as an example, when I attend the university I was an introvert person with limited friends and relationships. During the second semester, one of my professors suggested me to join the college`s sports club. As I get into the club I started to communicate with more people with the diverse ranges of idea and lifestyle. This was a turning point in my life, from that time I turned to be more sociable. Besides, encouragements of people who identified my talents and features made me more confident. Moreover, they proposed me the relevant job according to my skills. In one word, social activity is a crucial way to meet many opportunities.
Another noteworthy point to be mentioned is that extracurricular programs develop physical and mental health. Therefore, it is essential to be noticed by the university manager and financial investors. A relevant study which was conducted in the United State indicates that the students who studied in the colleges which were allocated their budget in sports had better performance in planning and organizing for their final exams and projects. Participant in this study utilized the sports saloons at least two hours a day in five days of the week. The result has probably attributed the fact that physical activity like exercising helps people to handle the stress by secretion of Endorphin which results in balancing the mental activity.
It can be concluded that investing finances in sport and social activity are as necessary as educational programs. In my opinion, it can ascend the chance of success for students. It is highly recommended that governments legislate rules on financing in educational space in order to compel the superficial managers to revise budget planning. Future of the country is in the hands of the current student.
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- Do you agree or disagree? It is better to relax by watching a movie or reading a book than doing physical exercise. Explain your answer with example and specific reasons. 90
- do you agree or disagree with the following statement? At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support. use specific reasons and examples to support your 83
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, at least, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2166.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 408.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30882352941 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06621075669 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551470588235 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 691.2 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6464217032 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4545454545 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5454545455 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146077059237 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041111274019 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407056501589 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.090490028843 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454940581935 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 86.8835125448 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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