Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Recently, universities started to give value to sports and social activities and by doing this they tend to spend more amount of their annual budget to facilitate programs involving them. Despite some disagreements through the idea, I personally prefer to send my children to a school
which evaluate both social and academic sides of the life equally.
There was a recent done by Japanese scholarship which shows the student who play sports for one hour per day do better at their school projects and studies. On this research, they recruited thirty students to form a typical high school and ask half of them to do daily sports, while the other half just focused their daily schedule on studies. results on the first exam by the end of the month illustrated a significant
increment on the grades on the first group.
my other discussion toward the issue is about the relation between social activities and the tendency toward being a more successful person in your future. Might not be an accurate quotation but; "If I have my last penny I would prefer to expand my communications with this, " Bill Gates, one of the true living legends in our century said.
communications and social activities are not only a gate through better life in the future, but also, they are the means to study and learn better. Take the situation when you have to go to school every day while you have nothing to do except studying; then why don't you stay home and study by yourself.
Schools are the places where educated us in every possible aspect of life and that being said, included more than mathematics and physics. A person who can not communicate well is nothing but the living reference book, lots of people might believe.
Concluding these, in the twenty-first century with the facilitation of the network usage just learning formulas are not enough and having the ability to communicate with other people is the true way to gain updated data and being part of the frontier people in the world.
Lastly, most of the students themselves, would prefer sports and social activities more than other academical school subjects and having the opportunity to spend their times at school on these activities might bring them the likability toward schools.
To sum up, universities and colleges having these activities are even more popular within students and these activities will help students with not only with their studies but also will help them to be a better person and have the tendency to join on more school activities, and these are my main reason to agree with the statement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 344, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Results
...ocused their daily schedule on studies. results on the first exam by the end of the mon...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...ment on the grades on the first group. my other discussion toward the issue is ab...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Communications
...ue living legends in our century said. communications and social activities are not only a ga...
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Line 6, column 141, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
..., they are the means to study and learn better. Take the situation when you have to go...
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Line 6, column 262, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...nothing to do except studying; then why dont you stay home and study by yourself. S...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, lastly, so, then, well, while, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2155.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 440.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89772727273 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55039192418 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511363636364 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 667.8 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.8440575537 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.928571429 100.406767564 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.4285714286 20.6045352989 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.53405017921 221% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143983626373 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487365492144 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374470820666 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0569490860961 0.150856017488 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362246051538 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 11.7677419355 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.